Monday, October 5, 2015

COUNTDOWN TO HALLOWEEN (Day 5): Prob'ly he was a witch


Shirley Jackson died 50 years ago at the age of 48 in 1965--just two years after the film based on her most popular novel, THE HAUNTING OF HILL HOUSE, had scared audiences with it's powerful use of
atmosphere and acting to portray ghostly horrors.



She was, of course, most famous for her short story "The Lottery" which was first published through The New Yorker.  It caused the largest response from it's readership ever before or since--mostly hate mail.  Some demanded an explanation, some were simply outraged.  Of course, it is now required reading in most U.S. high schools and one of the most well known short stories of the 20th Century.



Lots of her stories can come off that way, leaving the audience to judge for themselves and interpret them differently.  As is the case with my favorite of Miss Jackson's short stories, "The Witch".  And, sadly, it is all too short a story--though perfectly paced and appropriately presented.  In fact, it's so short (coming in at just over eight minutes on the audio recording below) that I'll wait here while you give it a listen.

Don't worry, I'm always happy to hear it again...




An excellent examination of the tale can be found here:


And another here:


Miss Jackson’s Obituary from the New York Times:





And here's the story itself if you're more of a reader than a listener...

THE WITCH Shirley Jackson

  The coach was so nearly empty that the little boy had a seat all to himself, and his mother sat across the aisle on the seat next to the little boys sister, a baby with a piece of toast in one hand and a rattle in the other. She was strapped securely to the seat so she could sit up and look around, and whenever she began to slip slowly sideways the strap caught her and held her halfway until her mother turned around and straightened her again. The little boy was looking out the window and eating a cookie, and the mother was reading quietly, answering the little boys questions without looking up.
  Were on a river, the little boy said. This is a river and were on it.
  Fine, his mother said.
  Were on a bridge over a river, the little boy said to himself.
  The few other people in the coach were sitting at the other end of the car, if any of then had occasion to come down the aisle the little boy would look around and say, Hi, and the stranger would usually say, Hi, back and sometimes ask the little boy if he were enjoying the train ride, or even tell him he was a fine big fellow. These comments annoyed the little boy and he would turn irritably back to the window.
  Theres a cow, he would say, or, sighing, How far do we have to go?
  Not much longer now, his mother said, each time.
  Once the baby, who was very quiet and busy with her rattle and toast, which the mother would renew constantly, fell over too far sideways and banged her head. She began to cry, and for a minute there was noise and movement around the mothers seat. The little boy slid down from his own seat and ran across the aisle to pet his sisters feet and beg her not to cry, and finally the baby laughed and went back to her toast, and the little boy received a lollipop from his mother and went back to the window.
  I saw a witch, he said to his mother after a minute. There was a big old ugly old bad old witch outside.
  Fine, his mother said.
  A big old ugly witch and I told her to go away and she went away, the little boy went on, in a quiet narrative to himself, she came and said, Im going to eat you up, and I said, no, youre not, and I chased her away, the bad old mean witch.
  He stopped talking and looked up as the outside door of the coach opened and a man came in. He was an elderly man, with a pleasant face under white hair; his blue suit was only faintly touched by the disarray that comes from a long train trip. He was carrying a cigar, and when the little boy said, Hi, the man gestured at him with the cigar and said, Hello yourself, son. He stopped just beside the little boys seat, and leaned against the back, looking down at the little boy, who craned his neck to look upward. What you looking for out that window? the man asked.
  Witches, the little boy said promptly. Bad old mean witches.
  I see, the man said. Find many?
  My father smokes cigars, the little boy said.
  All men smoke cigars, the man said. Someday youll smoke a cigar, too.
  Im a man already, the little boy said.
  How old are you? the man asked.
  The little boy at the eternal question, looked at the man suspiciously for a minute and then said, Twenty-six. Eight hunnerd and forty eighty.
  His mother lifted her head from the book. Four, she said, smiling fondly at the little boy.
  Is that so? the man said politely to the little boy. Twenty-six. He nodded his head at the mother across the aisle. Is that your mother?
  The little boy leaned forward to look and then said, Yes, thats her.
  Whats your name? the man asked.
  The little boy looked suspicious again. MR. Jesus, he said.
  Johnny, the little boys mother said. She caught the little boys eye and frowned deeply.
  Thats my sister other there, the little boy said to the man. Shes twelve-and-a-half.
  Do you love your sister? the man asked. The little boy stared, and the man came around the side of the seat and sat down next to the little boy. Listen, the man said, shall I tell you about my little sister?
  The mother, who had looked up anxiously when the man sat down next to her little boy, went peacefully back to her book. 
  Tell me about your sister, the little boy said. Was she a witch?
  Maybe, the man said.
  The little boy laughed excitedly, and the man leaned back and puffed at his cigar. Once upon a time, he began, I had a little sister, just like yours. The little boy looked up at the man, nodding at every word. My little sister, the man went on, was so pretty and so nice that I loved her more than anything else in the world. So shall I tell you what I did?
  The little boy nodded more vehemently, and the mother lifted her eyes from her book and smiled, listening.
  I bough her a rocking-horse and a doll and a million lollipops, the man said, and then I took her and put my hands around her neck and I pinched her and I pinched her until she was dead.
  The little boy gasped and the mother turned around, her smile fading. She opened her mouth, and then closed it again as the man went on, And then I took and I cut her head off and I took her head—“
  Did you cut her all in pieces? the little boy asked breathlessly.
  I cut off her head and her hands and her feet and her hair and her nose, the man said, and I hit her with a stick and I killed her.
  Wait a minute, the mother said, but the baby fell over sideways just at that minute and by the time the mother had set her up again the man was going on.
  And I took her head and I pulled out her hair and---
  Your little sister? the little boy prompted eagerly.
  My little sister, the man said firmly. And I put her head in a cage with a bear and the bear ate it all up.
  Ate her head all up? the little boy asked.
  The mother put her book down, and came across the aisle. She stood next to the man and said, Just what do you think youre doing? The man looked up courteously and she said, Get out of here.
  Did I frighten you? the man said. He looked down at the little boy and nudged him with an elbow and he and the little boy laughed. 
  This man cut up hi little sister, the little boy said to his mother.
  I can very easily call the conductor, the mother said to the man.
  The conductor will eat my mommy, the little boy said. Well chop her head off.
  And little sisters head, too, the man said. He stood up, and the mother stood back to let him get out of the seat. Dont ever come back in this car, she said.
  My mommy will eat you, the little boy said to the man.
  The man laughed, and the little boy laughed, and then the man said, Excuse me, to the mother and went past her out of the car. When the door had closed behind him the little boy said, How much longer do we have to stay on this old train?
  Not much longer, the mother said. She stood looking at the little boy, wanting to say something, and finally she said, You sit still and be a good boy. You may have another lollipop.
  The little boy climbed down eagerly and followed his mother back to her seat. She took a lollipop from a bag in her pocketbook and gave it to him. What do you say? she asked. 
  Thank you, the little boy said. Did that man really cut his little sister up in pieces?
  He was just teasing, the mother said, and added urgently, Just teasing.
  Probly, the little boy said. With his lollipop he went back to his own seat, and settled himself to look out the window again. Probly he was a witch.


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